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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: BobDavid on June 24, 2015, 01:55:02 am

Title: 22 June 2015
Post by: BobDavid on June 24, 2015, 01:55:02 am
watched the storm come and go
Title: Re: 22 June 2015
Post by: spidermike on June 24, 2015, 03:12:48 am
A great set, Bob.
I think it is a real shame about the tree on the first image - I htink having a full width of mid-tone images liek that would have been really effective.
The third (especially) and the 4th are wonderfully simple with a punch of colour from the beach hut.
Title: Re: 22 June 2015
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on June 24, 2015, 03:55:04 am
Good set. #3 is my favourite.

Jeremy
Title: Re: 22 June 2015
Post by: Diego Pigozzo on June 24, 2015, 04:18:30 am
IHMO the second and the third are the two that shows more of your style.
Title: Re: 22 June 2015
Post by: graeme on June 24, 2015, 05:06:53 am
Very very nice images, Bob.
No 1 is spectacular on it's own but 2, 3, & 4 make a brilliant set.
Thanks for sharing.
Title: Re: 22 June 2015
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on June 24, 2015, 08:56:35 am
Very very nice images, Bob.
No 1 is spectacular on it's own but 2, 3, & 4 make a brilliant set.
Thanks for sharing.
+1.
Title: Re: 22 June 2015
Post by: BobDavid on June 24, 2015, 09:34:45 am
By any chance, have any of you spotted the man in the first photo?
Title: Re: 22 June 2015
Post by: BobDavid on June 24, 2015, 09:36:50 am
IHMO the second and the third are the two that shows more of your style.

Agreed. The first picture is a stand-alone. I like the last one, but it drifts a bit from my "style."
Title: Re: 22 June 2015
Post by: RSL on June 24, 2015, 11:05:33 am
Edward Hopper would love #3. A fine set, Bob.
Title: Re: 22 June 2015
Post by: BobDavid on June 24, 2015, 11:26:40 am
Edward Hopper would love #3. A fine set, Bob.

That's a heady compliment. Thanks--it's an honor to hear someone talk about my work in the same breath as Hopper's.
Title: Re: 22 June 2015
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on June 24, 2015, 12:56:23 pm
By any chance, have any of you spotted the man in the first photo?
I didn't before. But now that you mentioned him I took another look and my eye went right to him.

Without the tree he'd be easier to spot. But I think I prefer having both him and the tree.
Title: Re: 22 June 2015
Post by: EricV on June 24, 2015, 01:37:40 pm
I think the second one would be spectacular, cropped to vertical format, to eliminate the extra net and much of the left side.
Title: Re: 22 June 2015
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on June 24, 2015, 02:22:14 pm
Very nice set. My favorites: #2 and #3.
Title: Re: 22 June 2015
Post by: Arlen on June 24, 2015, 04:51:30 pm
All are very interesting, Bob, but the third one really stands out to me.
Title: Re: 22 June 2015
Post by: seamus finn on June 25, 2015, 06:56:22 am
Well worth watching and waiting. Excellent.
Title: Re: 22 June 2015
Post by: brandtb on June 25, 2015, 09:40:34 am
Bob - the last three are very very nice...still not sure about the first...the composition maybe /B