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Equipment & Techniques => Landscape & Nature Photography => Topic started by: MasonJarr on December 16, 2014, 06:33:57 pm

Title: Samples from Arches NP
Post by: MasonJarr on December 16, 2014, 06:33:57 pm
I continue the attempt of teaching myself image processing.  It's a struggle.  Your suggestions, please.
Title: Re: Samples from Arches NP
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on December 16, 2014, 06:47:54 pm
Your processing appears rather restrained and natural. A bit more contrast might add extra pop.

The b&w one seems to need extra exposure overall, to get more feather detail, and to brighten the image overall - it looks a bit too "muddy" gray now.

The biggest improvement in landscape photography comes from shooting at the edges of the day, i.e., mornings and evenings, avoiding the harsh mid-day light that you seem to have here.
Title: Re: Samples from Arches NP
Post by: MasonJarr on December 16, 2014, 07:29:10 pm
Thanks for the feedback.  These were definitely shot in the late afternoon before that great slanted light came around.  I was just passing through the area and had many miles to travel so I wasn't able to take advantage of the best light.  I'll work on them some more.
Title: Re: Samples from Arches NP
Post by: rgs on December 16, 2014, 07:32:36 pm
Yeah, travel constraints, family duties and mealtimes all seem to work against the really good light too often.
Title: Re: Samples from Arches NP
Post by: thierrylegros396 on December 17, 2014, 03:17:40 am
The 2 first are well processed for me, nothing to change.

My suggestion for the 3rd as I find the background a bit distracting.

Thierry
Title: Re: Samples from Arches NP
Post by: MasonJarr on December 17, 2014, 11:09:29 am
Thank you.  For the sake of my education, let me explain a little about how/why I chose to process the raven picture as I did.  When I made that particular photo, I, and lots of other people were photographing in the area.  The raven flew to that perch and gave us all the "eye" as if he were saying that it was OK for us to visit, but we needed to be gone when the sun went down.  In my mind, I saw him as a guardian and titled the shot, "Raven Watch".  It was shot in color, but I changed it to mono and liked it better.  I chose to include the taller background to try to show the immensity of the environment.  Yet, obviously, the raven is the subject.  I do like your closer cropped version.  But when you say the background was "distracting", what made it that way for you?  Is it due to the shallow depth of field yielding a blurred background, or just too much empty space above the raven?  I appreciate the feedback and it helps me greatly.
Title: Re: Samples from Arches NP
Post by: thierrylegros396 on December 17, 2014, 11:43:17 am
In the upper left part, you have some shapes of bottles.

This is what is distracting for me.

No, I'm not an alcoholic ;) ;) ;)

Have a Nice Day.

Thierry
Title: Re: Samples from Arches NP
Post by: francois on December 18, 2014, 06:32:44 am
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No, I'm not an alcoholic ;) ;) ;)
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Double post?!? Are you sure you're drinking only milk/soda or non-alcoholic beverages? I seem to remember that in Belgium you have some excellent thirst quenchers.

 :D
Title: Re: Samples from Arches NP
Post by: DwayneOakes on December 18, 2014, 07:42:23 am
The images all work for me, I am a sucker for rock forms and could spend hours
in the second image area, the b/w works well for the raven. great work
Title: Re: Samples from Arches NP
Post by: thierrylegros396 on December 18, 2014, 09:03:43 am
Double post?!? Are you sure you're drinking only milk/soda or non-alcoholic beverages? I seem to remember that in Belgium you have some excellent thirst quenchers.

 :D

Hips, yes!

A few years ago, the Rochefort 10 was awarded as the best beer in the world, but I prefer the 8, almost 10 alcohol degrees  ;)

Thierry