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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: cjogo on March 05, 2013, 01:16:03 pm

Title: That familar land mark
Post by: cjogo on March 05, 2013, 01:16:03 pm
(http://photos.imageevent.com/estrump/fineart/large/EIFFEL%20UNDER%201.jpg)
Title: Re: That familar land mark
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on March 05, 2013, 02:46:28 pm
It's a good shot. I think it really ought to be perfectly symmetrical, though.

Jeremy
Title: Re: That familar land mark
Post by: Jaffy on March 05, 2013, 04:53:23 pm
I agree with the symmetry: a little bit off the right to match the left and it will look more "whoosh", for want of a better expression.
Title: Re: That familar land mark
Post by: cjogo on March 05, 2013, 06:34:17 pm
This was shot with a non-slr..  so just a little viewfinder ... (http://i.ebayimg.com/t/Hasselblad-Viewfinder-for-Hasselblad-SWC-Finder-Excellent-Condition-/00/s/OTg4WDEzMTg=/$T2eC16VHJGIE9nnWqs!UBP6uQShEog~~60_35.JPG)

Not too easy to line up in the dark -- a real edge to edge symmetry >   :o      I got close  ;D

thanks for the critical viewing    ;) appreciative the suggestions ... will crop and reload ...
Title: Re: That familar land mark
Post by: francois on March 06, 2013, 04:37:25 am
Tour Eiffel is beautiful at night. I agree with previous comments about symmetry but with your equipment, it's not an easy task.
Title: Re: That familar land mark
Post by: cjogo on March 07, 2013, 07:32:57 pm
A few more from that nights' session  ;)

Symmetry looks a little better ...
Title: Re: That familar land mark
Post by: l_d_allan on March 07, 2013, 09:43:35 pm
Quote from: Jaffy on March 05, 2013, 04:53:23 pm
I agree with the symmetry

You can still crop about 50 to 100px on the right (depending on resolution of original ... scan?)
Title: Re: That familar land mark
Post by: cjogo on March 08, 2013, 01:48:43 am
Quote from: l_d_allan on March 07, 2013, 09:43:35 pm
You can still crop about 50 to 100px on the right (depending on resolution of original ... scan?)

they are about 16 X 16 .... 300 dpi -- 70 megs ,,, scanned at 4000