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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: douvidl on August 06, 2012, 11:44:16 am

Title: Stairs along side
Post by: douvidl on August 06, 2012, 11:44:16 am

A ratty building in a ratty neighborhood, near the sugar fields.  Couldn't tell if were going up or coming down.
David

Title: Re: Stairs along side
Post by: Bruce Cox on August 06, 2012, 01:59:25 pm

I would try making the interior less bright and try to loose the thin white line unless it was string.

Bruce

Title: Re: Stairs along side
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on August 06, 2012, 03:33:14 pm

Quote from: douvidl on August 06, 2012, 11:44:16 am

A ratty building in a ratty neighborhood, near the sugar fields.  Couldn't tell if were going up or coming down.
David

I'd have one long staircase just going up
And one, even longer, coming down,
And one going nowhere special, just for show.

Jeremy

Title: Re: Stairs along side
Post by: douvidl on August 06, 2012, 05:59:33 pm

Jeremy;
Say, what?
You jest ?
David

Title: Re: Stairs along side
Post by: WalterEG on August 06, 2012, 06:16:35 pm

Quote from: kikashi on August 06, 2012, 03:33:14 pm

I'd have one long staircase just going up
And one, even longer, coming down,
And one going nowhere special, just for show.

Jeremy

But Jeremy,

Do you have the requisite wealth to qualify as a rich man?

W

Title: Re: Stairs along side
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on August 07, 2012, 03:45:44 am

Quote from: WalterEG on August 06, 2012, 06:16:35 pm

But Jeremy,

Do you have the requisite wealth to qualify as a rich man?

W

If only! ("the saddest words in the English language").

Jeremy