Luminous Landscape Forum
The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: scotto on October 04, 2017, 09:14:02 pm
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This image is from a recent hike in a park near my home. The prairie grass along the trail was eye-level height, and I couldn't see much else but sky. I thought the clouds would make a nice subject for a b&w conversion.
Always welcome thoughts on what's good and bad, general impressions... Thanks for looking.
Best regards
D7000 12-24mm at 12mm f/16 1/250sec ISO100
Lightroom and Topaz B&W Effects
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My first impression is that I wish you were a foot taller. Well maybe that’s a bit extreme. I wish you’d been standing on a footstool so that i could see more than a glimmer of land in the background. My brain wants to see what’s there. :)
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Looks like you used a "red filter" when you did the conversion to black and white. I like the photo fine. It looks like the picture could have been taken in the high plains of Colorado.
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At first I was uncertain about the sunburst, especially the placement. But I don't think it would be near so interesting a picture without it.
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At first I was uncertain about the sunburst, especially the placement. But I don't think it would be near so interesting a picture without it.
I thought about that, too, and I came to the same conclusion.
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... I wish you’d been standing on a footstool so that i could see more than a glimmer of land in the background...
I actually did consider taking a shot holding the camera over my head. There weren't any high places or tree stumps to stand on.
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Looks like you used a "red filter" when you did the conversion to black and white.
I used Topaz B&W Effects for the conversion and made use of the color sensitivity sliders. Seemed to do a nice job on the sky, including bringing out the details of the sunburst rays.
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I did crop a little off the top to position the sunburst a little higher in the final frame. As I worked on the image, I liked the contrast that developed across the image between the sunburst and the dark sky on the right.
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Lovely. Makes you want to run through the fields and chase the clouds, just like when we were kids. Where do those clouds go? I will ask Joni Mitchel. Maybe she knows.
JR