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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: N_N_Nikmat on April 24, 2017, 05:13:01 pm

Title: Dragged the octobox outside....
Post by: N_N_Nikmat on April 24, 2017, 05:13:01 pm

We get some nice sunsets as backdrops at our farm.

Title: Re: Dragged the octobox outside....
Post by: MattBurt on April 24, 2017, 06:52:05 pm

Nice shot of the dog and sunset but the foreground is a distraction for me. I think you could safely crop out the big, dark, oof area and it wouldn't be missed.

Title: Re: Dragged the octobox outside....
Post by: N_N_Nikmat on April 24, 2017, 07:12:00 pm

Quote from: MattBurt on April 24, 2017, 06:52:05 pm

Nice shot of the dog and sunset but the foreground is a distraction for me. I think you could safely crop out the big, dark, oof area and it wouldn't be missed.

Yep I think I agree with you...

Title: Re: Dragged the octobox outside....
Post by: francois on April 25, 2017, 05:08:52 am

Yes, this one is better, cleaner. It's a very nice portrait, congrats.

Title: Re: Dragged the octobox outside....
Post by: stamper on April 25, 2017, 06:07:54 am

I very much like the processing and the subject as well.

Title: Re: Dragged the octobox outside....
Post by: N_N_Nikmat on April 25, 2017, 06:11:51 am

Thanks for your feedback.