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BernardLanguillier
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April 23, 2015, 06:52:24 pm »
How do you guys like this one?
Shot in Mumbai, India.
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Bernard
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April 23, 2015, 08:50:13 pm »
I like it a lot. It's hard to tell which of them is more proud!
A very precious moment captured well.
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April 24, 2015, 12:18:24 am »
... interesting--a lot is going on formally and story-wise
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April 24, 2015, 05:01:03 am »
Lovely, deeper that a simple snapshot. I'd like to see a version with the legs of the man a tiny bit lighter. I don't know whether it would be an improvement or not, though…
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April 24, 2015, 05:48:03 am »
It is a very nice story and the processing of the man and the girl is fine. However I can see a little magenta banding in the sky. Perhaps a crop from the top? Overall very likeable.
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BernardLanguillier
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April 25, 2015, 09:28:12 am »
Thank you for your encouraging words!
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Bernard
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April 25, 2015, 11:05:15 am »
Fine shot, Bernard, but it could use a bit of work in Photoshop to bring up the faces. Backlight's wonderful stuff, but it can cause problems.
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April 26, 2015, 04:40:58 am »
I obviously don't know the nationalities of the guy and girl but they do look dark skinned to me. Lightening the faces would be problematic? I feel that there is enough rim lighting to make their faces recognizable?
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BernardLanguillier
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April 27, 2015, 08:05:21 pm »
They are indians, face colour was pretty dark to start with, but I agree they could be improved somewhat.
Thanks!
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Bernard
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