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BernardLanguillier

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Pride
« on: April 23, 2015, 06:52:24 pm »

How do you guys like this one?



Shot in Mumbai, India.

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Bernard

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Re: Pride
« Reply #1 on: April 23, 2015, 08:50:13 pm »

I like it a lot. It's hard to tell which of them is more proud!
A very precious moment captured well.
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Re: Pride
« Reply #2 on: April 24, 2015, 12:18:24 am »

... interesting--a lot is going on formally and story-wise
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Re: Pride
« Reply #3 on: April 24, 2015, 05:01:03 am »

Lovely, deeper that a simple snapshot. I'd like to see a version with the legs of the man a tiny bit lighter. I don't know whether it would be an improvement or not, though…
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Re: Pride
« Reply #4 on: April 24, 2015, 05:48:03 am »

It is a very nice story and the processing of the man and the girl is fine. However I can see a little magenta banding in the sky. Perhaps a crop from the top? Overall very likeable.

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Re: Pride
« Reply #5 on: April 25, 2015, 09:28:12 am »

Thank you for your encouraging words!

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Bernard

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Re: Pride
« Reply #6 on: April 25, 2015, 11:05:15 am »

Fine shot, Bernard, but it could use a bit of work in Photoshop to bring up the faces. Backlight's wonderful stuff, but it can cause problems.
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Re: Pride
« Reply #7 on: April 26, 2015, 04:40:58 am »

I obviously don't know the nationalities of the guy and girl but they do look dark skinned to me. Lightening the faces would be problematic? I feel that there is enough rim lighting  to make their faces recognizable?

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Re: Pride
« Reply #8 on: April 27, 2015, 08:05:21 pm »

They are indians, face colour was pretty dark to start with, but I agree they could be improved somewhat.

Thanks!

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Bernard
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