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William Walker

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Surveying Paternoster
« on: March 25, 2015, 12:15:22 pm »

I have been pretty busy moving from one side of the country to the other and all that that entails.
We have settled in and were able to go for a drive in our new surroundings for the first time today.

This shot was taken this morning in a small coastal village called Paternoster. I would be keen to know what you think of it.

Thanks
William
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Re: Surveying Paternoster
« Reply #1 on: March 25, 2015, 01:06:02 pm »

It has a bit of a New Topographics feel (a compliment). It also works on a semi-abstract level, even in a thumbnail form. The composition works, rather well balanced. Tonalities well placed and controlled. The dog is a nice touch too.

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Re: Surveying Paternoster
« Reply #2 on: March 25, 2015, 01:52:46 pm »

Without the dog I think it would be a bit boring. The dog's pose elevates the image considerably, IMHO.
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Re: Surveying Paternoster
« Reply #3 on: March 25, 2015, 02:36:55 pm »

Very nice, William. It has an Edward Hopper feel to it. (That's a compliment, too.)
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Re: Surveying Paternoster
« Reply #4 on: March 25, 2015, 03:19:39 pm »

I like it very much. Crop the bushes at the extreme right?

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Re: Surveying Paternoster
« Reply #5 on: March 26, 2015, 04:18:51 pm »

I agree that the dog makes the shot. I wonder if you could extract just a bit more detail from the wall.

I was hoping for an image of a continuous lift (elevator), though. I have fond memories of those, and of the practical jokes that could be played in them.

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Re: Surveying Paternoster
« Reply #6 on: March 26, 2015, 05:44:21 pm »

Great design to this. The dog warms the scene from stark and angular to contemplative.
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Re: Surveying Paternoster
« Reply #7 on: March 26, 2015, 05:56:06 pm »

The dog really gives this picture a story to tell.
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Re: Surveying Paternoster
« Reply #8 on: March 27, 2015, 06:36:50 am »

Thanks for all the comments.

It was the dog that made me stop, he looked like he owned the place!

William
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Re: Surveying Paternoster
« Reply #9 on: March 27, 2015, 06:39:43 am »

Simple, but effective.

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Re: Surveying Paternoster
« Reply #10 on: March 27, 2015, 07:22:50 am »

Great to hear from you again William!
Nice image BTW - you are right about the dog!

Tony Jay
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Re: Surveying Paternoster
« Reply #11 on: March 27, 2015, 10:01:08 am »

The dog really gives this picture a story to tell.
I knew the dog would appeal to you, Bob!  ;)
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