I would like to see the tops of the trees in the second image. Nice work.
Yes, the first is well framed, but the second needs less foreground and more background.
Here is a tip that I use very often.
With some 4/3 sensors cameras you can crop the jpg to 3/2 (screen) and keep all the Raw datas when shooting.
After when you are home, you can shift the the 3/2 frame into the bigger 4/3 frame to choose the best fit.
The only drawback is that you loose some pixels.
Have a Nice day.
Thierry