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armand

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« on: December 22, 2014, 10:27:14 pm »

working on older shots

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« Reply #1 on: December 23, 2014, 03:52:12 am »

Very tender moment coupled with a strong graphic treatment...Great job.


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« Reply #2 on: December 23, 2014, 06:11:54 am »

Very nice, Armand. Sort of a new direction for your work. Let's see more like this.
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« Reply #3 on: December 23, 2014, 10:06:05 am »

Not much to add except my congratulations, it's a charming image.
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« Reply #4 on: December 23, 2014, 12:42:31 pm »

+1

Since this is a crutique section, I'll ask about those two highlight slivers in the upper part: is that necessary to go with the theme "2" or a distraction? Should we see more (detail) of it or less?

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« Reply #5 on: December 23, 2014, 02:29:23 pm »

+1

Since this is a crutique section, I'll ask about those two highlight slivers in the upper part: is that necessary to go with the theme "2" or a distraction? Should we see more (detail) of it or less?

I did burn them a little to make them more obvious, part was to balance the picture and part to add some question marks.
More details out of those would be very difficult and I don't think it will add something consistent with the rest of the picture; less is open for discussion.

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« Reply #6 on: December 23, 2014, 06:10:41 pm »

Looks as if the highlight slivers give depth to the picture. They don't bother me.
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« Reply #7 on: December 23, 2014, 06:20:19 pm »

Looks as if the highlight slivers give depth to the picture. They don't bother me.

My thinking as well.

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« Reply #8 on: December 25, 2014, 11:17:30 am »

Great stuff.
I like how the living figures are offset by the almost otherworldly water.
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