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lorenzettifoto

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Read road
« on: December 19, 2014, 05:28:09 am »

A red road that takes me into the unknown
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muntanela

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Re: Read road
« Reply #1 on: December 20, 2014, 02:14:00 pm »

Il cielo sembrerebbe gravemente bruciato.


(The sky seems to be severely burnt out )
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Re: Read road
« Reply #2 on: December 22, 2014, 05:49:03 am »

I like it a lot but the clipped sky is a real problem… Go back and shoot again.
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Re: Read road
« Reply #3 on: December 22, 2014, 12:30:27 pm »

you are correct I'll try to correct it, but I think it lacks its signal
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Re: Read road
« Reply #4 on: December 23, 2014, 04:20:35 pm »

I feel like the road is too far to the right in the frame. This shot would work better in fog or golden hour light. The overcast, diffuse light is too flat to give this shot the magical feel that it needs.
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