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Richard Pearlman

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Treeline fog
« on: October 18, 2014, 09:34:25 pm »

Comments and critiques are appreciated.

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Re: Treeline fog
« Reply #1 on: October 19, 2014, 02:04:45 am »

Nicely done. I find the shrub on the left, on the foreground, distracting.

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Re: Treeline fog
« Reply #2 on: October 19, 2014, 12:51:21 pm »

I agree. I think that if I could clone out the bush and crop some from the bottom I will have a pretty good image. However, cloning it out may prove too difficult for my post-processing skills. Any suggestions regarding how to remove it?

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Re: Treeline fog
« Reply #3 on: October 20, 2014, 04:22:04 am »

Nicely done. I find the shrub on the left, on the foreground, distracting.

I also find the shrubs distracting but I don't think that removing them is easy or even possible without spending an awful lot of time. I tried on the posted image with Photoshop with barely acceptable results.
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Re: Treeline fog
« Reply #4 on: October 20, 2014, 06:01:33 pm »

This is my cloning attempt.

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Re: Treeline fog
« Reply #5 on: October 20, 2014, 11:46:26 pm »

I think you did a fine job with it. This version works nicely.
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Re: Treeline fog
« Reply #6 on: October 21, 2014, 03:40:07 am »

The "new" version, cropped and cleaned, is an definite improvement. My eyes go to the treeline and don't get stuck on the direct foreground objects.
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Re: Treeline fog
« Reply #7 on: October 27, 2014, 02:05:47 pm »

Nicely done. I find the shrub on the left, on the foreground, distracting.
+1 foreground is a distraction
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