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chuckn

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Observation Platform
« on: October 14, 2014, 12:53:52 pm »

Observation Platform at the Great Salt Lake Shoreline Preserve.
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Richard Pearlman

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Re: Observation Platform
« Reply #1 on: October 20, 2014, 08:39:06 pm »

I love the layering effect. It adds great depth to the image. The processing is also spot on.

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Re: Observation Platform
« Reply #2 on: October 20, 2014, 11:54:23 pm »

Good composition and light. Was the grain in the sky intended?

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Re: Observation Platform
« Reply #3 on: October 21, 2014, 03:53:28 am »

Very good framing, it lets the viewer's eyes travel into the frame, from the foreground vegetation to the distant mountain. The square crop works well here.
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Re: Observation Platform
« Reply #4 on: October 27, 2014, 02:06:10 pm »

Good square.
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chuckn

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Re: Observation Platform
« Reply #5 on: October 29, 2014, 05:09:57 pm »

Thanks for the comments. The graininess in the sky was added in post processing.

Chuck.
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Re: Observation Platform
« Reply #6 on: October 31, 2014, 06:39:24 am »

I like he B&W work. I think the platform should be larger in the frame. Without the explanation, I would have suggested to be rid of it.
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