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Jeremy Roussak

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If I were a cassowary
« on: October 04, 2014, 07:27:31 am »
on the plains of Timbuktu
I would eat a missionary
Cassock, bands and hymn book too.

Jeremy
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David Eckels

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Re: If I were a cassowary
« Reply #1 on: October 04, 2014, 09:11:17 am »
Works for me! 8x10 crop closest to the left side of his neck? ;)
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Re: If I were a cassowary
« Reply #2 on: October 05, 2014, 03:56:32 am »
An interesting bird. Possibly a little too sharp?
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Re: If I were a cassowary
« Reply #3 on: October 05, 2014, 08:09:22 am »
I like it, but agree a slight crop on the left might improve it a bit. I don't think the sharpening is a problem; more the natural complex of contrasting colors. (Also liked the poem.)

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Re: If I were a cassowary
« Reply #4 on: October 06, 2014, 06:42:06 am »
No problem with sharpening and I really like the colors and the smooth background. I haven't yet made up my mind regarding cropping the left side.
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