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Yellow and Blue
« on: September 29, 2014, 03:42:36 pm »

Walking the street in morning light

Comments welcome

Thanks for watching,

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Re: Yellow and Blue
« Reply #1 on: September 29, 2014, 04:08:47 pm »

Nice composition Francisco - I like the leading lines taking me to the graffiti on the vertical beam and the name on the building.
The image might benefit by bringing out the shadow areas a little to reduce the contrast between the yellow wall and the rest.
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Re: Yellow and Blue
« Reply #2 on: September 29, 2014, 04:13:18 pm »

Nice. Pete Turner/Eric Meola style?

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« Reply #3 on: September 29, 2014, 05:58:01 pm »

A wonderful grab, Francisco. Bravo!
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« Reply #4 on: September 29, 2014, 06:59:44 pm »

Indeed, bravo!
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Re: Yellow and Blue
« Reply #5 on: September 29, 2014, 07:15:24 pm »

Thank you very much for the comments!

Bob, I'm not sure about lifting the shadows, I have to think about it.

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Re: Yellow and Blue
« Reply #6 on: September 30, 2014, 12:17:16 am »

Thank you very much for the comments!

Bob, I'm not sure about lifting the shadows, I have to think about it.

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I say don't lift the shadows. More shadow detail would just distract from the lovely graphic effect you have now. And I usually want lots of shadow detail, but not in this one.
Bravo!
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