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Sunburst
« on: September 27, 2014, 12:37:00 pm »

A day of heavy rain and hail showers eases to allow a burst of sunlight to flood the Kyle of Tongue and the mountain of Ben Loyal behind. For a sense of scale, and it is hard to see, there is a house just on the left-hand side of the causeway, about 20% up from the bottom of the frame :-)

For those that don't know of the Kyle of Tongue is is a large estuary on the (very) exposed (especially in December!) north coast of Scotland

Still not sure if I have processed this one to maximise the scene, so appreciate all feedback

Phil
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Re: Sunburst
« Reply #1 on: September 27, 2014, 01:00:44 pm »

Not bad for a thirteen-year-old.
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Re: Sunburst
« Reply #2 on: September 27, 2014, 01:03:59 pm »

"Not bad for a thirteen-year-old."

Sorry lost me on that reply ???
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Re: Sunburst
« Reply #3 on: September 27, 2014, 01:37:05 pm »

Click on your name and check your profile.
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Re: Sunburst
« Reply #4 on: September 27, 2014, 01:42:44 pm »

Ah makes sense now! 

Well you learn something everyday :-)   Seems I am very young with a birth date of 01/01/01; wonder how that got set - looks like a default somehow.   Well now fixed and would have added forty odd years to the age, if I owned up to it.

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Re: Sunburst
« Reply #5 on: September 27, 2014, 02:36:50 pm »

Wonderful light, wonderful moment, beautifully captured!

I can't think of anything to critique, except for, perhaps a tad more foreground ocean, just to give a little more space along the bottom. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Sunburst
« Reply #6 on: September 27, 2014, 04:48:56 pm »

Thanks for the feedback.   I admit it would have been nice with a bit more foreground water, but there were just dark sandbanks which I cropped off.
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Re: Sunburst
« Reply #7 on: September 28, 2014, 03:50:14 am »

I very much like it except the water not having a yellow/orange cast on it somewhere. To be more "realistic" there should be less blue?

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Re: Sunburst
« Reply #8 on: September 28, 2014, 05:42:49 am »

@Stamper - I see what you mean.   It think it needed a slightly warming up of the bottom 3rd over the water to balance it with the top; so I gave it a +11 on the Temp applied as a grad across the bottom in Lightroom.

Hopefully, better balanced now ?

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Re: Sunburst
« Reply #9 on: September 28, 2014, 09:19:34 am »

Nice! That works for me.
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Re: Sunburst
« Reply #10 on: September 28, 2014, 10:01:06 am »

+1
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Re: Sunburst
« Reply #11 on: September 28, 2014, 10:27:28 am »

This is now a very fine image. :)

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Re: Sunburst
« Reply #12 on: September 28, 2014, 12:31:14 pm »

Many thanks everyone.
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