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chuckn
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August 25, 2014, 04:36:07 pm »
Here's another one from Red Canyon. Color this time.
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August 25, 2014, 05:37:43 pm »
Nice. However, I think that it would better if you darkened the floor. The lightness of the bottom of the canyon pulls the eye down and away from the main subject--the curves of the walls.
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August 25, 2014, 07:02:00 pm »
I would also open up the shadows just a little bit. But, yes, it is nice.
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August 25, 2014, 07:13:57 pm »
I like how the shadows reach into each corner except the bottom left which is the path. Leads me into it, and connects geometrically quite nicely.
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August 26, 2014, 04:03:20 am »
Nice shot. To me, it looks like the rock face on the right is a bit too light. I would darken it a bit, to add a more brooding feel.
I also like that there are no visible footprints on the ground.
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August 26, 2014, 04:20:49 am »
I like the composition with the right side that leads the viewer into the slot. I also agree with the previous comments about darkening the path&right wall/opening some shadows etc…
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