Nice image. I was in Little India Singapore about 2 years ago, and loved the place.
The picture works for me thanks to the diverging look of the woman, they might be looking away from you, or from each other.
I guess that a classical composition would want a look to keep you inside the image, but the way it is here kind of makes us wonder, and takes us exploring the place.
I guess that the very bright area left of the left woman's face is probably a bit unfortunate but you couldn't do much about it I guess. Towards the bottom of the image, I would personnally get rid of the cut feet by cropping some.