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matoqui

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Chair on balcony
« on: August 12, 2014, 09:06:58 am »

Thanks for your c&c!

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Re: Chair on balcony
« Reply #1 on: August 12, 2014, 11:13:53 am »

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Re: Chair on balcony
« Reply #2 on: August 12, 2014, 11:42:53 am »

Overprocessed? Boring?

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Re: Chair on balcony
« Reply #3 on: August 12, 2014, 11:48:14 am »

Overprocessed? Boring?

Not boring but over-processed for my tastes. A more subtle treatment would be better suited. I would also straighten the image (make the palm trees vertical). I like the geometry of the fence and the chair.
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Re: Chair on balcony
« Reply #4 on: August 12, 2014, 11:50:03 am »

Thanks Francois! Very useful and much appreciated.

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Re: Chair on balcony
« Reply #5 on: August 12, 2014, 01:57:26 pm »

Here is a second version. Thanks!

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Re: Chair on balcony
« Reply #6 on: August 12, 2014, 03:46:27 pm »

I guess I'm missing the point, over-processed and crooked or not.
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Re: Chair on balcony
« Reply #7 on: August 12, 2014, 04:17:23 pm »

It is a simple picture but I find the geometry interesting. Also, I sometimes get carried away with the "clarity" adjustments in LR, and was curious about the opinion of other people in this regard.   
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