Hi Jeremy,
I suspect I know where this is! I think you've done a pretty good job of getting a moment here without too much steam interfering with the mineral edge to the pool; however, I think with a little more time working on this image could elevate it into a much more striking shot - I would love to see more depth to the orange and green tones for example, which are such unusual combinations that they would grab the attention, and the mineral 'shoreline' is a little bright and almost too contrasty and could take a little calming down. That said, it is a good moment to have caught it like this and I certainly understand why you took it as the location just cries out for these almost dimensionless shots.
I think the potential is definitely there for a much more punchy image and the location certainly warrants that. Thanks for sharing and best regards, N.