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Lonnie Utah

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Upper Provo River Falls
« on: August 04, 2014, 10:05:41 AM »

Went on a family camping trip this weekend. I got out to shoot for just about an hour under flat light. While I came back with this shot...



What I didn't come back with was the lens hood to my Zeiss 24-70mm f/2.8. Pricing them on the Sony website $250, with 3rd party vendors about 1/2 that (if you can find one). :(

f/13
15 sec.
ISO 200
24mm
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Re: Upper Provo River Falls
« Reply #1 on: August 04, 2014, 10:33:44 AM »

I really like the framing with the successive waterfall "segments". Too bad you lend hood didn't float, for that kind of price, it should!

Anyway, you have a superb image and that's what counts.
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Re: Upper Provo River Falls
« Reply #2 on: August 04, 2014, 03:39:00 PM »

I always try to lean towards constructive/critical feedback and my initial impression is I can't come up with any.  I might have gone with 10 seconds instead of 15, but looks great regardless.
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Re: Upper Provo River Falls
« Reply #3 on: August 04, 2014, 03:41:48 PM »

I really like the framing with the successive waterfall "segments". Too bad you lend hood didn't float, for that kind of price, it should!

Anyway, you have a superb image and that's what counts.

I always try to lean towards constructive/critical feedback and my initial impression is I can't come up with any.  I might have gone with 10 seconds instead of 15, but looks great regardless.

Thank you both! :)
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Re: Upper Provo River Falls
« Reply #4 on: August 04, 2014, 04:12:19 PM »

Very nice overall tonality and composition!

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Re: Upper Provo River Falls
« Reply #5 on: August 04, 2014, 05:19:12 PM »

A beautiful image in every regard. One small niggly is the white "spot" of water on the far side od the stream -  probably spinning foam or the like. It keeps drawing my eye away from exploring all the silvery pathways of the river water (but then again, I'm easily distracted ;) )
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Re: Upper Provo River Falls
« Reply #6 on: August 05, 2014, 04:23:33 AM »

I like the way the water is parted in two on the lower part of the frame. Then each "branch" goes to its respective corner of the frame.

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Re: Upper Provo River Falls
« Reply #7 on: August 05, 2014, 07:16:33 PM »

"A beautiful image in every regard. One small niggly is the white "spot" of water on the far side od the stream -  probably spinning foam or the like. It keeps drawing my eye away from exploring all the silvery pathways of the river water (but then again, I'm easily distracted Wink )"

Obviously!    This is a wonderful photograph ................... just say it................ Wonderful Photograph!
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