A friend of mine used to work for the British Antarctic Survey, and had published a photo of a tent on the ice, taken at night. He lit the inside of the tent with a headtorch, giving the orange tent a warm orange glow. It's been replicated a thousand times since, so part of me thinks it's great that you chose another form for lighting the tent, but another part think it would have looked better if you'd followed suit & had the light glowing through the tent.
The second is much easier to comment on - it's great