It's a great (iconic?) location and therefore difficult to make anything startlingly different with. What you have managed to do here is lift the location out of the 'norm' with the balance of the slightly changed viewpoint (no Oxbow Bend!), the focus on Mount Owen almost isolated from the rest of the Teton range, and the addition of that fabulous sky that layers up the the frame.
I quite like the darkness that the image seems to have - foreboding is perhaps the term - but I susepct it was taken very early morning as those clouds do tend to burn off during the day (but happy to accept I'm wrong
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The more I look at it the more balanced I find it - and I especially now like the balance of the cloud shape directly above and sitting on the top of Mnt. Owen almost echoing it's shape.
It's a location I love and I am always looking to see how others interpret it - I think you've done well here.
Kind regards, N.