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William Westergren

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« on: June 11, 2014, 04:45:48 am »

Hi,
Quite recent portrait taken with D700 and 85mm. Two strobes with main light through a silver umbrella.

Cheers!

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David Anderson

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Re: Portrait
« Reply #1 on: June 11, 2014, 05:01:01 am »

Bit of a near miss for me sorry.

The leading eye looks a bit dopey until you zoom right in on it and makes the model look disinterested.
I do like the hard light as it suits the look of the model, though the pose is a little awkward.
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Re: Portrait
« Reply #2 on: June 11, 2014, 05:02:56 am »

Thanks David for your constructive comment. Appreciated!
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Re: Portrait
« Reply #3 on: June 11, 2014, 06:59:11 am »

IMHO, you seem to have gone out of your way to make the model appear somewhat less than attractive.  Gritty noise disturbs me.    ;)
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