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DwayneOakes

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The Forgotten Forest
« on: May 22, 2014, 08:31:10 PM »

Thanks for taking a look !
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Paulo Bizarro

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Re: The Forgotten Forest
« Reply #1 on: May 23, 2014, 03:45:18 AM »

I like the photo, it gives a very calm impression and feeling of being there, with nice colours and the touch of the flowers.

However, perhaps if the horizontal log was a bit more off-centre, the composition would be more dynamic?

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Re: The Forgotten Forest
« Reply #2 on: May 23, 2014, 07:22:07 AM »

I like the photo, it gives a very calm impression and feeling of being there, with nice colours and the touch of the flowers.

However, perhaps if the horizontal log was a bit more off-centre, the composition would be more dynamic?

Thank you very much for the comments on this one Paulo ! I really appreciate it !

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Dave Pluimer

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Re: The Forgotten Forest
« Reply #3 on: May 23, 2014, 06:57:01 PM »

Lovely scene. I also think that placing the log lower in the scene or on a slight angle would take it to another level. Still, a fine image.
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Re: The Forgotten Forest
« Reply #4 on: May 23, 2014, 09:11:33 PM »

Lovely scene. I also think that placing the log lower in the scene or on a slight angle would take it to another level. Still, a fine image.
I think I agree with Dave. It isa fine image, but a slightly higher angle of view would be even better.
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Re: The Forgotten Forest
« Reply #5 on: May 24, 2014, 09:00:58 AM »

Thank you very much Dave and Eric !
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Re: The Forgotten Forest
« Reply #6 on: May 24, 2014, 02:56:31 PM »

I like the scene and the comments. My question is would a vertical composition make a difference?
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Re: The Forgotten Forest
« Reply #7 on: May 24, 2014, 05:29:20 PM »

I like the scene and the comments. My question is would a vertical composition make a difference?

Not sure but it is amazing how much depth you can get out of a 30mm aps-c/50mm film lens.
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