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mseawell

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The path
« on: May 15, 2014, 12:55:33 am »

Rehweiler, Germany shortly after sunrise...the path.
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Re: The path
« Reply #1 on: May 15, 2014, 01:18:24 am »

Great transition

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Re: The path
« Reply #2 on: May 15, 2014, 05:06:28 am »

Excellent.

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Re: The path
« Reply #3 on: May 15, 2014, 07:39:27 am »

Strong lines and the now famous mseawell® fog, it's a winner!
Well done.
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Re: The path
« Reply #4 on: May 15, 2014, 02:24:49 pm »

Really good, as usual. The only quibble I have is with the arc of light in the signals, which is bright and distracting.

Jeremy
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Re: The path
« Reply #5 on: May 18, 2014, 11:56:07 am »

Great possibilities here, but I find the signal box (?) hugely distracting. There are hills behind that provide a wonderful depth to the photograph but are blocked by the box. My eye goes down the tracks and wants to follow the line of hills back, but is riveted by the contrasting black box, almost like a blank white spot that grabs your attention away from the subtle details.
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