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mmbma

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New York City from Hudson river bank
« on: May 05, 2014, 09:16:34 pm »

At sunset after rain. cloud was burning


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Slobodan Blagojevic

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Re: New York City from Hudson river bank
« Reply #1 on: May 05, 2014, 09:47:41 pm »

Strong graphic interpretation. Too bad you clipped the tip of the tallest building. I would also go easier on the saturation, particularly blue. Just a little bit more space in the sky and water wouldn't hurt either, helping the image to "breathe."

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Re: New York City from Hudson river bank
« Reply #2 on: May 05, 2014, 11:57:12 pm »

Very saturated image.  Probably look better toned down a bit so its not shouting at me.
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Re: New York City from Hudson river bank
« Reply #3 on: May 06, 2014, 04:29:32 am »

I don't mind the (over)saturated look, as NY is a city that "shouts".

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Re: New York City from Hudson river bank
« Reply #4 on: May 06, 2014, 10:27:55 am »

Thanks for all the feedback. I agree the water is a little overly blue (I was lazy not to tone each individual color). However I was aiming for an over saturated look as the colors are pretty crazy that evening. the brick buildings were almost lit red by the sun.



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