Hi Riaan
I saw this post drifting slowly down the list and know how that feels when no-one responds...
I find it very difficult to pass comments on styles of photography that I don't "do" - I don't feel qualified, unless it is something very special that even I can see it!
This picture is one of a sequence of similar beach shots - some of which I found appealing, in spite of it not being "my thing".
My immediate reaction to this one was the "dirty pinkness" of it and wondered whether that was intentional, either way, I find it quite overwhelming.
I am sorry I can't be more constructive because I do not know what your intention with the picture is. Perhaps some of the other guys might chip in here.
William