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Todd Suttles

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Foot Bridge
« on: April 21, 2014, 05:37:04 pm »

Not sure about this one. Does anyone else like it or am I seeing it wishfully? C&C appreciated, -thanks t.
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Re: Foot Bridge
« Reply #1 on: April 21, 2014, 06:15:27 pm »

Not sure about this one. Does anyone else like it or am I seeing it wishfully? C&C appreciated, -thanks t.

To my eye, it's cluttered by the foreground branches and the footbridge of the title is a minor part of the scene, which is dominated by the shed. I wonder if you'd achieve a better focus by getting rather closer to the bridge, so the large shed was reduced to mere background.

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Re: Foot Bridge
« Reply #2 on: April 21, 2014, 06:43:10 pm »

Thinking about the mowing makes me feel a little tired.  I respectfull disagree with kikashi, if I had to choose between the foreground branches and the bridge etc, I would go for the branches.  However, I think they are wonderful together.  After my one drink here, it is not too busy for me.  It is too green, but what are you going to do?
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Re: Foot Bridge
« Reply #3 on: April 22, 2014, 06:31:52 am »

I find it too cluttered… I'm going to get a drink!
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Re: Foot Bridge
« Reply #4 on: April 22, 2014, 07:21:45 am »

Thinking about the mowing makes me feel a little tired.  I respectfull disagree with kikashi, if I had to choose between the foreground branches and the bridge etc, I would go for the branches.  However, I think they are wonderful together.  After my one drink here, it is not too busy for me.  It is too green, but what are you going to do?
I like this better, thanks
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Re: Foot Bridge
« Reply #5 on: April 22, 2014, 08:39:38 am »

NO!!!
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Re: Foot Bridge
« Reply #6 on: April 22, 2014, 09:02:39 am »

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Re: Foot Bridge
« Reply #7 on: April 23, 2014, 09:30:59 am »

OK, done with this one; thanks everyone. I appreciate your feedback, -t
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