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Richard Pearlman

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Local Swamp Golden Hour
« on: March 31, 2014, 07:55:54 pm »
Comments and critiques are appreciated. What worked? What did not work? Thanks.
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BernardLanguillier

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Re: Local Swamp Golden Hour
« Reply #1 on: March 31, 2014, 08:16:17 pm »
Since the sun start is where the eye goes first, I would say wrong lens/wrong aperture.

Besides, the overall color balance doesn't say golden hour, it may be better to keep your white balance closer to day light.

Compositionwise, it works for me.

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Bernard
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Richard Pearlman

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Re: Local Swamp Golden Hour
« Reply #2 on: April 01, 2014, 08:42:22 am »
Bernard, thank you for your comments. What do you mean by wrong lens/wrong aperture? I intended to take this shot with a wide angle and small aperture (for the sunburst). Why would you have chosen differently?
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