Thanks Chris, are either of these going in the right direction?
I can't tell you what is the "right" direction, since its not my image.
But I think the now structure in the second is a good step ahead.
The first of the two edits is quite darker, which I sort of like,
but I'd try to keep the snow as bright as possible without losing structure -
like you did in the second edit.
So - maybe a mix of both?
Cheers
~Chris