You know I like to mess with copyrighted masterpieces ... 
Here is my suggestion:
I like this too. Very strong. I like the lines and areas in my version's composition also. It was juried into a show a few years back even when I knew LESS than I do now about PP
. I spent so much effort composing it the way I saw it, it never occurred to me close in.
I think your's is a better choice however for simplicity and strength. Thanks for showing me. I saw your crop alert message when I looked at the post the next day last week, BUT i was so unhappy with the way I had PP I just deleted the entire post. Thanks Chris!!!!!
