I tend to prefer landscapes to look what I feel is "realistic" rather than punched up for impact.
That said, I always find my raws to look kind of flat, and I almost always increase contrast and clarity some, but seldom touch saturation.
So from my point of view, your raw image needs some clarity /contrast boost, but probably not as much as you have done in your processed shot. And to me the processed shot looks as if saturation has been boosted a bit past the point of plausibility, so I would want to pull it back some. Perhaps some saturation boost would help but not as much as you've done, IMHO.
Key points to keep in mind, however:
1. Oversaturated landscapes seem to be popular on the web, and
2. My own color vision is defective, so what do I know?