Michael, It's a good try, but what do you see here that you feel makes it worth "working on"? It's not landscape and it's not architecture and it's not fashion, etc., etc. It looks as if it was intended as a street shot. But what I see is a photographer reflected in a window and a woman walking toward the photographer. I don't see any interplay between the photographer and the woman other than the fact that the photographer is taking a picture of the woman. I don't see a story and I don't see ambiguity.
But don't let my nasty criticism get to you. You're obviously somebody who's trying to do street photography. Street is the most worthwhile and rewarding use of a camera, but it's damned difficult. Keep trying, and spend some time with people like Cartier-Bresson, Winogrand, and Frank. If you work at it you'll probably get there. In any case you'll have a lot of fun.