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Christoph C. Feldhaim

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Tramuntana vista, Mallorca
« on: November 21, 2013, 03:29:35 pm »

Tramuntana range, Mallorca.
Tried a more painterly approach in post this time.



original (too soft) edit:
« Last Edit: November 22, 2013, 01:17:40 pm by Christoph C. Feldhaim »
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Re: Tramuntana vista, Mallorca
« Reply #1 on: November 22, 2013, 04:04:17 am »

I like the composition and the softness in the sky and clouds. Don't like the softness in the mountains, it takes away some of the interesting texture.

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Re: Tramuntana vista, Mallorca
« Reply #2 on: November 22, 2013, 04:39:52 am »

You're thinking more along the lines of this?

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Re: Tramuntana vista, Mallorca
« Reply #3 on: November 22, 2013, 07:25:29 am »

I prefer the second one.  My first response to the original was that it leans toward CG and a bit of a whimsical feel but unfortunately finding the sharpness that you expect in the hillside is more satisfying.
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Re: Tramuntana vista, Mallorca
« Reply #4 on: November 22, 2013, 07:41:06 am »

I prefer the second one.  My first response to the original was that it leans toward CG and a bit of a whimsical feel but unfortunately finding the sharpness that you expect in the hillside is more satisfying.
Chuck

Yeah - I tend to undersharpen or even blur intentionally at times.
My impression is, there are too many oversharpened images around where the sharpening destroys too much of the atmosphere.
So I often undersharpen or even soften distant features, but in case of these distant rocks I agree its better to give them some more snap.
The file is still work in progress and not yet in a state where I would print it, but I am on the way, and think its okay to present it here in the current iteration.

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Re: Tramuntana vista, Mallorca
« Reply #5 on: November 22, 2013, 12:16:40 pm »

The shadowplay seems more distinct in version 2. I like it.

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Re: Tramuntana vista, Mallorca
« Reply #6 on: November 22, 2013, 12:47:21 pm »

The shadowplay seems more distinct in version 2. I like it.

Apart from sharpening I also did a little painting ... :D

Edit- on a second look:
For a final ready-to-print version I'd probably soften the grass a bit - I find it a bit too crunchy now.
But the rocks needed the sharpening
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Re: Tramuntana vista, Mallorca
« Reply #7 on: November 23, 2013, 02:12:14 pm »

Yeah - I tend to undersharpen or even blur intentionally at times.
My impression is, there are too many oversharpened images around where the sharpening destroys too much of the atmosphere.
So I often undersharpen or even soften distant features..


Yes, I prefer the first. Oversharpening is a pest and a cliché in landscape, especially where everything is equally sharp and the sense of recession due to atmospheric softening is lost.
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