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Larry Heath

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Growing in the soup
« on: November 18, 2013, 06:04:25 pm »

I was over at Ollie’s pond the tail end of last month and I can’t seem to decide if I like this shot. Thought and comments kindly solicited.




Thanks for looking.
Later Larry
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Christoph C. Feldhaim

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Re: Growing in the soup
« Reply #1 on: November 18, 2013, 06:51:24 pm »

Go nearer or crop I'd say.
Its a lovely motive worth trying.

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Re: Growing in the soup
« Reply #2 on: November 19, 2013, 01:51:26 am »

Go nearer or crop I'd say.
Its a lovely motive worth trying.
I agree.  For this image I'd do a landscape crop of the top of the frame.  But then I'm not a big fan of OOF foreground elements that don't add anything to the image.  :)

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Re: Growing in the soup
« Reply #3 on: November 19, 2013, 04:13:16 am »

the log (?) with the growing plant under this light are excellent. The OOF branck/stick in the foreground, not so much, for me.

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Re: Growing in the soup
« Reply #4 on: November 20, 2013, 06:34:55 pm »

I think there was some good advice here. So I did a bit of reworking. I think I like this one a good bit better.



Later Larry
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« Reply #5 on: November 21, 2013, 01:56:59 am »

Much better.

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« Reply #6 on: November 22, 2013, 02:59:58 am »

Yes.
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