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dhancock

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Living at the End of the World
« on: November 15, 2013, 03:57:07 pm »

The fog was wonderful, and I thoroughly enjoyed the morning. What do you think of this photograph? I have mixed feelings about it.
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Christoph C. Feldhaim

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Re: Living at the End of the World
« Reply #1 on: November 15, 2013, 04:02:22 pm »

First impression is:
I like it - the light, color, atmosphere and the juxtaposition of the bush with this dark thing.
But something appears weird.

If I am not mistaken there is a shoreline and a faint horizon.
The shoreline is oblique and at first I thought it was an oblique horizon.
Maybe you could get the real horizon a little bit more outstanding to balance this out.

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Re: Living at the End of the World
« Reply #2 on: November 18, 2013, 11:29:10 am »

Thanks! I think you're right. I'll have to try working on that.
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Re: Living at the End of the World
« Reply #3 on: November 19, 2013, 04:19:51 am »

Nice exposure and mood, but the centered horizon, albeit faint, does not work for me in this one.
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