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batmura

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nowhere
« on: November 15, 2013, 02:06:36 pm »

nowhere by batmura, on Flickr
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dhancock

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Re: nowhere
« Reply #1 on: November 15, 2013, 04:11:11 pm »
You did a great job converting to greyscale, but your subject seems to lack interest - at least for me. The texture just isn't enough to draw me in.
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Re: nowhere
« Reply #2 on: November 17, 2013, 04:54:44 am »
I like it. I think I'd like it more if the structure sloping down to the water on the left weren't cut off, but I imagine you had your reasons.

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Re: nowhere
« Reply #3 on: November 17, 2013, 07:19:29 am »
It looks like a structure with possibilities. Perhaps an angle that produced more reflections?
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Re: nowhere
« Reply #4 on: November 18, 2013, 04:16:54 am »
To me, it would work better if there was more space above, to allow the pier to breathe a bit more.
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