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mattpallante

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Laurel Creek, Teneessee
« on: November 02, 2013, 04:27:15 pm »
Not sure about this, what do you think?

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Re: Laurel Creek, Teneessee
« Reply #1 on: November 02, 2013, 04:28:39 pm »
Well, the image should help......................
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Re: Laurel Creek, Teneessee
« Reply #2 on: November 02, 2013, 04:50:53 pm »
I think you had a good subject and a good idea. The execution is somewhat lacking. The horizontal, centered flow of white water is rather static, compositionally speaking. Certain shades of green appear oversaturated as well.
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Re: Laurel Creek, Teneessee
« Reply #3 on: November 02, 2013, 08:42:14 pm »
I agree with Slobodan, and also find that this beautiful scene lacks a bit of context (background, foreground), but that might just be the landscape photographer in me speaking.
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Re: Laurel Creek, Teneessee
« Reply #4 on: November 03, 2013, 09:14:57 am »
Lots of good elements.
I can imagine moving to the right, increasing focal length and trying to compose on the chute and surrounding rocks, putting the chute on the left. Worth revisiting.
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