I’ve been looking at these two for a couple days now trying to decide which I like better, they are both exceptional. I really like the sky in the first, I like the castle in the second better of the two, but I think the darker castle in the first works better under that sky. So all and all I think the first is best as is, I guess. But, of course there is always a but, I think I’d like a bit less foreground, yes I know you worked very hard to get that lovely diaphanous water effect, still the dark bottom edge is slightly distracting as Scott pointed out earlier, I think so as well. Also I’ve gotten really quite fond of 9:16 or 10:16 ratio look, so I tried a crop like this.
Seems to give the shot a bit more expansive look.