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batmura

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Riva in B&W
« on: October 27, 2013, 06:08:44 PM »

« Last Edit: October 28, 2013, 05:06:53 PM by batmura »
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Re: Riva in B&W
« Reply #1 on: October 27, 2013, 07:17:29 PM »

I wish you could have found a slightly different angle, so that  the stick is not covering the rocks behind it. I think that a free-standing stick would add the sense of depth as well. You might also want to add a little bit more contrast to the overall image. Or perhaps just water, it does appear murky.

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Re: Riva in B&W
« Reply #2 on: October 28, 2013, 06:07:28 AM »

I prefer the color version you posted… Here, the stick is a problem. Removing it would, in my opinion, improve the shot.
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Re: Riva in B&W
« Reply #3 on: October 28, 2013, 07:24:00 AM »

I wish you could have found a slightly different angle, so that  the stick is not covering the rocks behind it. I think that a free-standing stick would add the sense of depth as well. You might also want to add a little bit more contrast to the overall image. Or perhaps just water, it does appear murky.

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Re: Riva in B&W
« Reply #4 on: October 28, 2013, 05:07:42 PM »

Hey, guys! Any opinion whether #2 is any better in terms of editing and composition?
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Re: Riva in B&W
« Reply #5 on: October 28, 2013, 05:11:27 PM »

Hey, guys! Any opinion whether #2 is any better in terms of editing and composition?

I want my stick back - but in the proper place !  ;)

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Re: Riva in B&W
« Reply #6 on: October 28, 2013, 05:13:53 PM »

No. 2 is certainly better in composition term. Editing well that is so very subjective and in that regard I prefer the second one too.
Though the colour version linked to above is fantastic.
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Re: Riva in B&W
« Reply #7 on: October 28, 2013, 05:15:29 PM »

#2 is better than #1, but your color version is the best, both overall and compositionally speaking.
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