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RobbieV

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Waterdown
« on: October 24, 2013, 05:09:16 PM »


Fall in Waterdown by VizeReveals, on Flickr

Comments/edits/critiques very much appreciated.
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Slobodan Blagojevic

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Re: Waterdown
« Reply #1 on: October 24, 2013, 05:16:35 PM »

Nice and serene.

I would crop out the leftmost edge to eliminate two bright orange spots (one in the lower third, the other in the upper corner),

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Re: Waterdown
« Reply #2 on: October 25, 2013, 01:34:11 PM »

Thanks Slobodan.

One of the few shots from the shoot where I didn't go for focus across the frame. I personally felt it works here.

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Re: Waterdown
« Reply #3 on: October 25, 2013, 03:23:45 PM »

I've been struggling with this one for a day, Robbie, and I agree with you. I think Slobodan's wrong about the crop. As far I'm concerned it's just about perfect as is. Ready to hang.

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Re: Waterdown
« Reply #4 on: October 25, 2013, 03:40:04 PM »

...I didn't go for focus across the frame. I personally felt it works here.



Absolutely. Nice job.
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