Sorry, but it doesn't work for me.
The "headless effect" needs a close look to actually be seen - I saw a second image of this man on your website which imho looked better.
The crop also should be tighter if you ask me.
I'd agree, Chris. The picture needs to be tighter, and the headless "man" needs some dodging to make it clear he's headless. The solution would have been to get closer, but as we've all learned, once you make a mistake you have to live with it, so cropping, in this case, becomes necessary.
And I agree that Stamper hijacked the thread by plopping down his own picture, which then competes with the original. On the other hand, as far as I've seen, everybody on LuLa has always been comfortable with suggested modifications on the original. Like this one.