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Andrew Johns

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The details of a rainy day.
« on: September 22, 2013, 01:51:29 AM »





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Re: The details of a rainy day.
« Reply #1 on: September 22, 2013, 03:43:20 AM »

Very good. I particularly like the first, though I think I'd try to tone down the brightness at the top, which distracts from the two leaves.

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Re: The details of a rainy day.
« Reply #2 on: September 22, 2013, 05:58:58 AM »

Two very fine images.

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Re: The details of a rainy day.
« Reply #3 on: September 22, 2013, 06:43:50 PM »

Very good. I particularly like the first, though I think I'd try to tone down the brightness at the top, which distracts from the two leaves.

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I like the processing, especially in #2.

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Re: The details of a rainy day.
« Reply #4 on: September 25, 2013, 10:07:46 PM »

Both fine photographs with wonderful detail, contrast and tactility (is that word?).

I think the first, though, suffers from the leaves apparently levitating over a black abyss. Even some very slight detail int he black would add depth and "grounding" to the image. But then again, I'm coming from more of a "realist" camp and have trouble suspending reality when the subject of a photo is so real to begin with.
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