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photog89

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Critique
« on: September 18, 2013, 01:45:18 pm »

Hello!

23 year old photographer in the U.K. Have been taking photo's for 4 years now. I do fashion/portraiture work, would like any critique on anything to do with website, photographs, blog etc. Mainly on the photographs though.

Let me know! Thanks!

www.kurtisslloyd.com
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« Reply #1 on: September 19, 2013, 06:10:31 am »

Hi Kurtiss

Regarding the picture here - I love the way you have captured the relationship between man and horse.  The production is quite low contrast though, which may well be your choice, but I think the large bright white border is sucking some of the life out of the picture.  Being so low in contrast and brightness the picture needs a darker border - I think.

Some good stuff on your website. The 'About' page perhaps needs more 'about' you though.  It just gives your name and that you live and work in London.  Do you work as a photographer, or is it an aspiration?  If the latter, I think it's good to say that - then people know where you are coming from.  I think the 'about' page is quite important in that it helps the visitor to relate to what they are seeing.

Jim
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