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The Ute

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Coyote Buttes after the rain- Monochrome
« on: September 08, 2013, 08:10:47 AM »

Opinions welcome.

1st Monochrome.

Thanks in advance.


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Isaac

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Re: Coyote Buttes after the rain- Monochrome
« Reply #1 on: September 08, 2013, 12:50:24 PM »

Where in the picture do you want me to look?

The overall contrast seems very strong - fwiw too distracting for me.

There's a slight echo of the cloud shapes in the left-side rocks. The sun seems to brighten the right-side, perhaps that could be enhanced.
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The Ute

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Re: Coyote Buttes after the rain- Monochrome
« Reply #2 on: September 08, 2013, 02:08:09 PM »

thanks for the feedback.
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Re: Coyote Buttes after the rain- Monochrome
« Reply #3 on: September 11, 2013, 11:05:03 AM »

Nice composition, too much contrast, oversharp - in other words the editing isn't to my taste, especially the over-dramatised clouds.

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Re: Coyote Buttes after the rain- Monochrome
« Reply #4 on: September 11, 2013, 04:01:16 PM »

Thanks for the feedback.

Much appreciated.

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Isaac

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Re: Coyote Buttes after the rain- Monochrome
« Reply #5 on: September 11, 2013, 08:38:50 PM »

I neglected to say that there are pictures that could be made from what you've shown that I would like.

Also, what you've shown would be very good for some purposes -- it very much depends what you're trying to achieve.
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Peter McLennan

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Re: Coyote Buttes after the rain- Monochrome
« Reply #6 on: September 14, 2013, 05:08:16 PM »

I love it.
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The Ute

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Re: Coyote Buttes after the rain- Monochrome
« Reply #7 on: September 14, 2013, 05:40:03 PM »

Thank you Peter.

Glad someone did.

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Re: Coyote Buttes after the rain- Monochrome
« Reply #8 on: September 16, 2013, 01:49:15 AM »

The sky seems severely overworked.  Great area, isn't it?
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The Ute

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Re: Coyote Buttes after the rain- Monochrome
« Reply #9 on: September 16, 2013, 12:49:23 PM »

It is one my favorites. I go there often.

Thanks for the feedback.
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Re: Coyote Buttes after the rain- Monochrome
« Reply #10 on: September 18, 2013, 03:56:57 AM »

Very nice and dramatic. Contrast, as said above, is also a bit high for my taste…
Good job!
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Re: Coyote Buttes after the rain- Monochrome
« Reply #11 on: September 18, 2013, 08:11:04 AM »

Thank for the feedback.

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