A very nice image, though the sky looks unnaturally dark to me. Did you bring the levels of the sky down? I would like to see a version with the sky just a little lighter.
Same for me.
I also would have prefered it with slightly less "local contrast/clarity" but more global contrast with the foreground slightly darker.
Pay attention if you use Lightroom 5 as the clarity slider is "to use with caution".
For me the Clarity of LR4 was more easy to use without drawbacks.
In LR5 I rarely push the slider over 10.
Very good overall composition and nice framing !