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armand

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This morning
« on: September 02, 2013, 05:02:09 PM »

This morning on my way back from work I got these among others
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Harald L

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Re: This morning
« Reply #1 on: September 02, 2013, 05:07:54 PM »

Please show us the others, too ;)

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Re: This morning
« Reply #3 on: September 03, 2013, 02:41:08 PM »

Please show us the others, too ;)

Harald

If you had to ask ...  :)
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Re: This morning
« Reply #4 on: September 03, 2013, 06:50:31 PM »

With an indistinct grey sky, indistinct green trees, and indistinct green field and focus on the yellow with a 100mm lens leaves me less than enthusiastic I'm afraid.
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Re: This morning
« Reply #5 on: September 03, 2013, 07:06:30 PM »

Two more grey skies with indistinct trees and green fields. The third has some contrast with the sunlight and I think the fourth could be improved with a bit of PP with your permission?
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Re: This morning
« Reply #6 on: September 03, 2013, 07:09:31 PM »

With an indistinct grey sky, indistinct green trees, and indistinct green field and focus on the yellow with a 100mm lens leaves me less than enthusiastic I'm afraid.

Are you talking about the first or the second group?

On the first I don't seem to be bothered by what you mentioned although you are right that DOF is not that good and the sky is far from interesting. I could try what stamper said and take it out entirely out of picture although I'm not sure what it would do to the scale.

On the second group the first 3 are more like showing the potential, they are not where I was hoping so I have no defending to do there.

The last color one doesn't fit your description anyway.
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Re: This morning
« Reply #7 on: September 03, 2013, 07:13:46 PM »

I just saw you second post. I'm not totally sold on the need for front to back deep dof in all landscape shots, particularly where it's more about shapes and colors. I do admit I try to get more than less most of the times though  ;)
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Re: This morning
« Reply #8 on: September 04, 2013, 04:30:07 PM »

Here are a few modified versions. Better?
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Re: This morning
« Reply #9 on: September 05, 2013, 03:00:43 PM »

The two "pastel"s are delicious.

Jeremy
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