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mseawell

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Where the horses stand
« on: August 30, 2013, 12:55:10 pm »

Morning fields in shadow...where the horses stand.
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Jeremy Roussak

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Re: Where the horses stand
« Reply #1 on: September 01, 2013, 01:39:00 pm »

I like it very much, but I think it would benefit from lifting the shadows in the foreground. The bale looks like a big black lump as it is, intrusive and uninteresting.

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Re: Where the horses stand
« Reply #2 on: September 02, 2013, 06:38:36 am »

I've left this photo open on my display for a long time and in the end, I find that the frontmost bale is too present. It grabs my attention. Lightening it would certainly help…
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